Spring into fitness

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2 comments

  • Allison

    I think that everything said was very logical.

    However, consider this, what if you were to write a killer headline?

    I am not suggesting your information isn’t solid, but what if you added a title to maybe grab folk’s attention?

    I mean Spring into fitness | FOX5 San Diego

    – San Diego news, weather, traffic, sports from KSWB is kinda vanilla.

    You ought to glance at Yahoo’s home page and note how they create news titles to grab people interested. You might add a related video or a pic or two to get readers excited about everything’ve written.

    In my opinion, it might bring your website a little bit more interesting.

  • Porter

    Everything published made a ton of sense. However,

    what about this? suppose you added a little information?

    I ain’t saying your content isn’t solid., however suppose

    you added a post title that grabbed folk’s attention? I mean Spring into fitness | FOX5 San Diego – San Diego news, weather, traffic, sports from KSWB is kinda boring. You could look at Yahoo’s home page and watch how they create news headlines to grab people interested.

    You might add a related video or a picture or two to grab

    people excited about what you’ve written. Just my opinion, it could make your posts a little bit more interesting.

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